all this needs is better quality design, you have the animation and content down
thanks, I used a mouse for this and for some reason it makes my drawings all strange. I got a tablet recently.
The animation was fantastic and I thoroughly enjoyed the dance break but the whole thing didn't really have a plot and was plain disturbing.
the animation was good but the rest was just horrible. It kind of seemed like you just made up all the jokes within five minutes and went with them. If you had some good material you would be in business. Maybe collaborate with someone you know who could help you, because this just missed the mark.
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